A Woman is an umbrella..
She takes the heat,
She welcomes the rain,
Ensures that her family
Is away from pain...
Gets herself drenched,
Yet ensures everyone's gain,
Burns herself into sweat,
Though her recognition in vain.
Few lines added By Sanika..
Dilip, here is my addition (argument) in continuation to your poem --
But...
She's the first one you think of to protect from heat or rain,
She's easily recognized whether made-up or plain,
Playing the victim, is not always the name of our game,
APPRECIATION along with recognition, should be part of our fame.😊
She takes the heat,
She welcomes the rain,
Ensures that her family
Is away from pain...
Gets herself drenched,
Yet ensures everyone's gain,
Burns herself into sweat,
Though her recognition in vain.
Few lines added By Sanika..
Dilip, here is my addition (argument) in continuation to your poem --
But...
She's the first one you think of to protect from heat or rain,
She's easily recognized whether made-up or plain,
Playing the victim, is not always the name of our game,
APPRECIATION along with recognition, should be part of our fame.😊
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